i wander to alot of crazy places
lately in my life
it may be real in this world
but its krazy on the other worlds
that i have traveled to
this is the places i go
the skys always a swirling
red green and yellow
the road is green
and the grass is yellow
the houses are red
the noise you hear
well its mellow n quiet
the women always naked
and always wanting pleasure
this is the place i go
when i wanna feel better
all is great in these rolling skies
theres smoke billowing my way
so here i come agian
to this rolling beuatiful place
hell ya
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what a wonderful place to escape too huh? very nice job
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yea, the little world inside your head...i have one to. very creepy place sometimes...but this is a great poem, well done
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wow. this is sweet. good job.
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great imagery, i like the last stanza, wouldn't that be nice? great write hun!
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nice job. i like this one. i like the part where it says "well its mellow n quiet
the women always naked
and always wanting pleasure"
there is a really nice piece of imagery there.
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