Racing thoughts, and memories
Stripped my mind
Of what I've left behind
That I've always cherished
If I could change
What only could have been
Love that flourished me within
Exceedingly fallen in knots
Tangled all emotions
I have ever felt
Letting them go
Left me overwhelmed
Seizing the memories
They'd never leave me
As far as I could tell
Only killed me inside
To love and had lost
Then to have never loved at all
Breaks my aura
The inner lining, to have let it go
I once had
Feeding me by hand
The love beating in me
Feeling apart from the world
If I could change
What only could have been
Was the love
I could have had
Author notes
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Comments
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I did my best For not sleeping in a couple of days
thanks. it is much better.
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HAHa yeah I edited already and changed some stuff... cause it didn't sound right and I had spelling errors I caught that in my revise.
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much better
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Breaks my auro<---check your spelling. I think that's supose to be "aura". Overall its a great write. Very emotional and visual. Thank you for following the rules and good luck...
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