Sky rockets burst over my head
whenever I watch Elvis sing and dance.
Sexy should be his middle name.
He truly deserved his first great chance.
My secret daydream of the man:
to be together alone to kiss,
sends shivers down my twitching spine,
leading me to naughty bliss.
Elvis is my one dreamy love!
I wish to have known him for real.
I hope he'd be like in my dreams.
I can't believe how he makes me feel.
A contest entry
- If Elvis Came To Town-Quickie by JeannieD Hunter.
600 points, ended February 10, 2009, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'd like some feedback.
Comments
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Well done! Yup in our dreams our fantasy man will fulfill our every wish! We are in control. Great writing. Thanks for sharing your secret with us! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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