Sleeping beauty
Gurl you are so pretty
Every period, every hour and very step I walk the streets of New York City
I think of you sweetie.
Come to my house to my party
When mom’s out and dad’s on duty
Let’s kick butt and play karate
I luv you shorty.
Show me if u are naughty
But gurl I won’t yet lose my virginity
I just wanna play with your clitty.
Author notes
Remix Factory
my first ever poem 
A contest entry
- For Trophyless Poets!! by DramaQueen469.
900 points, ended March 31, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite contest by Sadistic klown girl.
1000 points, ended June 2, 155 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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ohh my wows
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Um.... perverted for twelve.. well who am I kidding!
I thought naughty when I was 12! haha
Nice job remix
lmfao!
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Interesting enough
Good write for a 12 year old. I like the style. A bit out there for someone your age but I wouldn't expect any less from a boy. So good job. Keep up the good work!
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if you are really a 12 year old this is hallarious
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Um.... this is like .... well there are no words to describe it. It is definately a poem Thank you for sharing.
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that's....just gross...you're SUPPOSED to be 12 freaking years old for crying out loud!!!
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This is good for a first poem.... I like to read poems with lack of puncts. and none or little rhyme. I must say this piece is different. I'm assuming you misspelled words on purpose for emphasis or some other reason...... Am I right?
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wow .. that was interesting. xD lol
I liked it
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lol well this is a good peom....there are a few grammatical errors...." New Yoke" is new york i love the lines "show me if u are naughty but girl i won't yet lose my virginity i just wanna play with your clitty" lol keep up the good work
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i know but i purposly typed it that way i think it lookd kool, but i'll correct it if ya say so
tahnx for da read and comment and the applauz
btw i think you'r HOTT !
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Lovely poem!! Could I just ask you to place your username in your notes, so I can check your "trophyless" status
Thanks for entering and good luck!!
Maria
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wow a lil vulgar but its ok
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This is a good first poem much the way I used to write. Ah the good ole days lol keep it up and you will be a better writer than me
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good
I Like alot you can tell that you really put your soal into it -
um wow..... it's pretty cool I guess..
Freiden,
Liebe,
Und tokio Hotel
~Kiwi (heartless) -
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spell check--unless done on purpose art has all forms and you have art in you you need to keep bringing it out good luck
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i think i did it on purpose i luv it that way, gurl it looks kool isnt it ? my frinds write that way 2
or maybe i dunoo how 2 spell, lol
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funny...
but cute at the same time..lookin' forward to reading more
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Thank u soooooooo much !!!!!!!!!!
my first ever poem i'm glad that u liked it
and thanx 4 adding me as ur fav too
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I like the phrase "New Yoke City"... brings images of yoked oxen to mind somehow. As for the last line... there's really not a lot to work with there.
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