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It's All Over

My hands are shaking bad
as I lay the razor down
I've never been this sad
I've never wore a frown

My life was always great
nothing to make me cry
I never knew how to hate
and I never knew how to lie

But I did learn how to pretend
and what I said was just a lie
Your actions I can't defend
I just want to die

I could see the hate in your eyes
whenever you looked at me
My arms are scarred by your lies
but even that you couldn't see

The razor was the only thing I had
to bring me up when I was down
Don't tell me it wasn't that bad
because in all the lies I could drown

So when you come home tonight
to find me lying on the floor
Don't ask me to try and fight
for a life I can't live no more

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