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Hey pretty kitty

Hey pretty kitty
dancing around the room
paws in the air
and wearing perfume

'teach me how to dance'
the pretty kitty moves'
teach me to prance'
so i can improve'

hey pretty kitty
in a ballet skirt
where did you get that
are you trying to flirt


get me a ballet skirt
teach me how to use it
and find me a pretty shirt
or you'll get a hit

hey pretty kitty
smiling so cheeky
chatting up the dogs
sounding so squeaky

how do you charm
make them yours
and be so calm
tell me more

hey pretty kitty
eating tuna fish
and not that fat at all
even after seven of tuna dish

tell me your diet
why your so thin
or i will start riot
and put you in the bin

Hey pretty kitty
dancing around the room
paws in the air
and wearing perfume







Author notes

pretty kitty!awww

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Comments


  • GotLilt
    February 19, 2009
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    cute~!


  • Melodies
    February 14, 2009

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    A SONG! YES! If ever there was a cat song, this is IT! CUTE AND EVEN BETTER THAN CUTE! It's adorable.

  • Purrsanthema
    February 10, 2009

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    Very much fun! I have a question from across the pond: in stanza 8, what does fin mean? Is it a misprint for thin? It so, I think the your is the wrong your, and it should be you're. The spell check, alas, is no help to all of us when coming to homonyms! Keep up the good work!


  • toomysterious
    February 9, 2009
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    This sounds like it could be a delightful little song.