So its serious.
So I've certainly slipped sidelong into something serene,
soaked in satin saliva,
blithely slithering somewhere terrifying,
a salamander on coals can choose the fire or the cold.
A soldier sometimes speaks to me of skilled sushi slavery
then bravely drags flags through Baghdad's ragtag.
He says the men in minarets see the sun set last,
and that the air up there comes somewhere directly from the past.
They speak in words, and in architecture as old.
A salamander on coals can choose the fire or the cold.
So its serious for him as well, I consider;
placed in a place where man's works are just litter
opposed to my nose-to-nose closed-mouth morning kisses,
the explosions grow closer than previous misses.
Steer it back some years:
we were peer-to-peer ear-to-ear near,
never wore fear or failed to appear
severely at your nearest mother-fucking function,
he and I were two guys names in conjunction.
With ampersands in our grand plans, we rolled:
two salamanders on coals could choose the fire or the cold.
And all told, in retrospect I reflect directly on the growth we could both quoth on the epitaphs of one-another,
brother,
friend,
summer ends on friendship bliss sailing into sunset.
Don't forget
this ghost-boat you've loaned me only gets more lonely
as my homely life pulls me towards old.
A salamander on coals chose the fire or the cold.
So its serious.
At last. It never was before.
Our stories were folklore with humor at their core,
and now with life looming like a tumor, dooming, sure,
I say we still have many tales untold.
A salamander on coals can choose the fire or the cold.
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A rich work of poetic musing...
The alliteration and word play in this poem is catching to the tongue and leaves the reader in splendor's way.
"A soldier sometimes speaks to me of skilled sushi slavery
then bravely drags flags through Baghdad's ragtag."
I said these lines several times and found myself; SMILING FROM SHEER ENJOYMENT AND EDIFICATION.
Your brilliance as a writer has elevated since the last time I enjoyed one of your poetic works. I am amiss that it has been so long since I've visited . Please forgive my absence.
I am overwhelmed at what I have unearthed in this ingenious work of wonder.
Much Love & Respect Always ♥
Renee


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That's so nice of you, lady. Sometimes I feel that happiness and not being lonely has killed the writer in me. Its so good to receive some kind of contrary affirmation.
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