Kindly see how the Sabbath hymns rise up in the cathedral
Isn't it lovely to see the mighty decorated cupola?
Such a pretty song sung by the cute choristers:
Swinging along to a catchy inspirational beat.
Mighty is the huge leaking resurrection;
Yet will it stay within the gay bishops' undies
As a golden wave of soiled celestial praise
Reverberates from cloister to ancient cloister?
Such a glorious waving sea of flowing melody,
Ever-praising God in frenzied fervent faith!
How the priests genuflect in religious ecstasy,
Orgasms only just kept at bay by concentration.
Lovely tunes for humming along to happily,
Eternal irony about the non-existence of God.
Author notes
A revised and probably not much improved version of an earlier epic.
A contest entry
- IRONIC Acrostic Poem Contest by MassMan.
2350 points, ended February 25, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Impartial comments always welcome.
Comments
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I know you tried - and I hope you had fun doing it, but personally I found the clash between religion and the overpowering sexual overtone, very revolting--so as to be blinded by it's merits. I will give you credit for a very overpowering poem.
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I knew better than to click on this...
I need to take a long hot shower to wash off your clever filth. No clappies. -
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No tongues in the earhole either, naughty boy.
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another acrostic... Keith's was good and so is this!! xx debs
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Never before have I read
In such a competition,
Cracked, crazy verse!
Each word is redolent
Of the gutter. How can you
Niggle at such blessed themes,
Even doubtlessly mocking religion?
Every time I close my eyes
Dark images arise, brought alive by your words!
No, I will not suffer such sacrilege!
Alter this without delay!
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Enter it. If you win I'll accept a 50% cut of the points. You can keep the green cup.
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Deal or....no deal ? Good to see you back, and in top form.
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