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Dance with me...



'Got any naughty thoughts today?'
he asked lazily
as I contemplated what I could see
up his pants leg with my helmet light -
'Something slow and gentle and langerous,' I said
and found his attention piqued
by the proposal of a slow dance
and passing the time

       with our clothes not quite off...



So we dug out some Bob Marley
clingy and embraceable and slinky
'Perfect' he said
with that almost whisper against flesh
and the soft clucking of past conversations
swirling around us while the earth dipped
hip to hip, lips to neck, nipples to chest
    
 I remember when we used to sit…
you can sing along if you like
softly, in my ear
     everything's gonna be alright…
gothic talk and tangled tongues
     oh little darlin', don't shed no tears
             (no woman, no cry...)


Unwittingly, we evoke thousand-year-old rituals
this dance a spontaneous act of magic
like wearing the skin of a lover in the rain
the psyche follows the rhythm of the cosmos, where it
harmoniously mingles with the universe,
       mysterious
              hidden
                    sacred



We are slow to burn, pausing before
the lightning strike
that long drag holding out for sparks --
this is how it feels, inciting the raw fire
unhurried at first, that little flicker of thought
that ignites into burning frenzy
deliciously, convolutedly slow
with no awareness except the rapture
ready to go panting and stroking

                         before succumbing to ice...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Ice
 

Dance with me…

©crisstiena

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Author notes

Large Image: Dance with me by ~pein2k4@deviantArt

Small Image: Ice by Mick Payton

Song (italicised excerpts): No Woman, No Cry ~ Bob Marley

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 16

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    sheer poetic brilliance.
    It is original, sensual, and just plain amazing.

    Great job here

    Delila


  • JinSays gold member
    February 16

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    Beautiful.
    Sensually appealing, well orchestrated, hell. . .I didnt even have a problem with the music choice. No Woman No Cry is my favorite Marley song. This poem was like a dance, just smoldering underneath enough to keep the reader right on the edge.
    fantastic.
    Love,
    jin


  • Night Hope gold member
    February 10
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    *whimpers & puts on Etta James & Janis Joplin as a defense measure*







  • Malabu
    February 9

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    love this most

    this is how it feels, inciting the raw fire
    unhurried at first, that little flicker of thought
    that ignites into burning frenzy
    deliciously, convolutedly slow

    a slow dance for sure and though its been awhile i read any of your latest poems... you still have the magic..
    mal


  • quietly burning
    February 9
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    a dance that starts out front and goes to the back both i think ...


  • Balldinger silver member
    February 9
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    woah! ice must be very afraid right now...

  • Rowan gold member
    February 9
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    this is poetry slow-dancing. Simply beautiful.

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