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A quiet place

By the brook
Trees grow
Acorns on the ground
So peaceful, so serene
No sound
Except the whispering of the leaves
And the quiet swishing of the brook
A good place to read

Author notes

Its not very deep or very good but its just what I thought of.

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- http://triarubian.deviantart.com/art/The-Ice-Trees-112290841

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Comments

  • I love it! very beautiful indeed. You have painted such a peaceful picture woith your words.
    Thank you so much for your entry.
    Gaylene


  • thejollytinker
    February 9

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    Depth is measured in many ways... I think you did fine and who doesn't like a good, private place to read!? G


  • cupcakealia
    February 9
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    short and to the point