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I love a good old storm

I love the smell in the air
before the rain does fall
Or starring out at the full moon
to which the wolves call

I love the sound of thunder
as the lightning strikes from each cloud
The wind so strong I can watch and count
each leaf fall to the ground

I love the lack of sunshine
on a dark and stormy night
and the sound of the rains splatter
just fills me with delight

I love a good old storm
and me it doesn't scare
as in my eyes no other form
of weather does compare

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WORD BANK : Rain, Moon, Thunder, Cloud, Leaf, Sunshine, Splatter

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  • abu nuwas
    August 7

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    I also...

    like storms, and this poem nicely brings out the wild fel of them. It is a little forced in places, and the word is 'staring', with a single 'r'. But content v appaealing to e


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    February 20
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    "I love the lack of sunshine
    on a dark and stormy night
    and the sound of the rains splatter
    just fills me with delight"

    Gosh that sounds like me!
    I love thunder and lightening storms ^^

    Thank you for entering,
    I wish you the best of luck!
    Claire x


  • MassMan
    February 10
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    WoW !

    Picturesque & lovely take--
    a wonderful Poem here!

    David