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Dirty Secret

Why’s this secret a dirty one?
Someone told you it’s like a gun?
But guns are so immedi-ate
And cutting just does aggravate
But then it’s pain that cutters seek
For them or OTHERS on the creek?
Of life that they won’t navigate
They just need to initiate
And recognize to just give LOVE
To all those ones who wish to shove
You down into that great abyss
Though they’re not ones who you would kiss
Just realize this life’s a trail
And there’s really a holy grail
That grail is just your consciousness
The wine is that with which you bless
Others you meet along the path
Put LOVE into your epitaph

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  • Thank you for the comment on Dirty Secret moonsail

  • wow how very evvoccative, the imagry here is awesome, it has real touchability to it
    bravo


  • Star Shine
    February 9
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    Some positive thoughts for those who want to feel the hurt. Well done.