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Love poem for Davey

If love was ment for a world of it
I would have you,
i wished for you for so long,
since i started to chat with you,
the photos we shared,
the comments i made,


I really did think u got the picture,
till it was to late,
your right,
i'm a silly girl and i don't know what i want,
but i do,
i just wish you knew,


where did my love go for you,
it a flame that burns when i see your eyes,
it the love i tried to show you,
it's the mistakes i though you'd would've understood why i made them,
i guess your not the guy i thought you was,
nor the girl i though i would be for you....


so i hope you live a happy life and understand i tried to make an conection but you found out to late



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