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Beautiful Decaying Peace


she falls slowly to his feet
as he breaks down the small bits of love
she held onto

she falls waiting for him to pick her back up again
a sad beautiful decaying mess
she cracks

she falls down waiting for the blackness of peace
hoping that it shall fall onto her soon
she crys


she falls down onto the throne of hell
selling her soul for some understanding
she smirks



she falls down at his grave with a smile on her face
knowing what waits for him in the end she dies
a beautiful decaying peace falls around us all

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  • John BoSox
    November 2

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    Very dark..I love your style..I like how you show your emotions..I can see your talent..Write more often..I would like to read them..Thanks


    John


  • teengirl16
    February 9
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    this is a sad poem. but i liked it n i liked how u ended it.


  • tonight
    February 9

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    Sad, yet beautiful.

    This is beautiful poetry, it's so sad, but it's so common
    to see such happenings in the lives of the friends that
    surround us, and also in our own lives.

    It's always a good idea to become accustomed and
    introduced with heartbreak, that way, when it does happen
    in our lives, we are prepared to handle it wisely.