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To Us

As we sit in the dark,
Drunk with love and vodka,
Our lives drift by,
Like clouds over our shirtless bodies,

The sun tanning our skin,
As we drift in and out of dreams.
Only you can bring me back to life,
Only you can revive me.

Each day we spend together,
We drift more and more into love,
And at the same time we drift into our dreams,
While we tap our ash,
Forgetting the world behind us,
Moving forward with spontaneous actions.

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