I am the ranting ghost of a lunatic
But, the burden of love is the heaviest of all:
And as it weighs down upon me,
I can’t help but inherit the composure of a much saner man, again
The routine holds together like bad carpentry
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For whatever its worth... not much...
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good word use. it has a sense of...knowing the truth and being okay with it. im not quite sure how to word what I'm trying to say.
but yes, very well done
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very interesting response:
"knowing the truth and being okay with it"
its a very personal piece so that just gave me some more perspective
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Dude, nice, this could be like a JFAC style song, go over the lyrics in different patterns, all over, nice work.
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