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Haunted

I walk down the alley,
dark and cold,
I feel the wind in my hair,
the paranoia seeping into my pores.

I spin around,
someone’s following me!
I gasp,
its my past.
come back to haunt me.

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  • FallingRainDrop
    April 1

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    wow i like this alot. its short but still leaves a good impact and shows your writing talent. i really like "its my past, come back to haunt me" that was really great. awesome poem! :]


  • Emotional-wreck
    March 26

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    I spin around,
    someone’s following me!
    I gasp,
    its my past.
    Loved the ending.
    It is quite ironic how the past creeps up on us at the worst moments...or even timess least expected. This poem was short,but deep. My favorite