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Blind

Don't mention eyes
I do not have them.
Today I am
a blind cave fish
swimming among all
the other
fleshy, eyeless beings.
Pulled by cold currents,
we manage to avoid
ever touching.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 9
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    I like the definate tone of the sentiments shared..very well thought poetry...