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Candle

A candle burns
Hot to the touch
I cant help but reach
and feel that rush.

The pain is delightful
and the Heat
Buring bright.

I have to let go
But i cant look away
I just want to sit here
Forever...Just stay.

I burn..
like a candle on a stomy night
bright and wavering
waiting for first light

will you be my shelter
and comfort from the storm..

will you love me
and never let me mourn

I love my fire
it burns from within
wavering slightly
but never going thin.

Just spewing...

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  • Licinius6790Archias silver member
    February 23, 2009

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    Excellent

    A very fine write, indeed. You expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

  • patrick20traveler
    February 23, 2009
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    Great metaphor, but it always burns out.


  • tombruize
    February 10, 2009
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    Nice...

    Oh that internal, eternal ember... I like how you made it burn. Good job!


  • Ravyn Stormcrow
    February 9, 2009
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    Spewing or not...the goddess flows within you