Breathing
Deeply
In
Out
Softly
Barely
Gasping
Choking
Hurting
Crying
Drowning
Swimming
Surfacing
Choking
Gasping
Barely
Softly
Out
In
Deeply
Breathing
Living
A contest entry
- Escaping from Boredom...I could use a little help, here! by TwoFacedPsycho.
700 points, ended February 13, 2009, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Trying something new...
Comments
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Yeah, I think like this all the time. Words pop in my head in such manners as well. Thanks for the entry!
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didnt mean to have it look like it was actually flowing..but if you look it does..kinda cool!!!
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Similiar to japanese style...It is powerful in its own right...very well done.
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