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She's Perfect.

She's perfect
she's everything that everyone wishes to be
that's what the normal eye would see
but if you'd open your eyes
you wuold realise
there's another side
the fucked up side she tries to hide
she lies
she decieves
she cries
when she hides
and her pride's
slowling eating her alive
but all those things are blind to the naked eye
and you still believe she's everything you'd like to be
but she's not perfect
no she's not perfect.

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  • poeticallyxpathetic
    February 16
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    I'd rather not be perfect, I'm fine with my flaws they make me who I am and if other people can't except that than thats fine I don't need them in my life. The people who mind don't matter, the people who matter don't mind.


  • Decorus Somnium
    February 16

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    There are so many "perfect" people today. But, at least what I think, is to be good inside. Not perfect. We can never be perfect.