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Wildflower Wreath

Missing image
eyes cover sorrow
with pictures
of posy
blow turns to bloom
blue
to red rosy

quivers of teardrops
on lashes
recall
dew-strung
necklace
crimson of fall

wildflower wreath
hammock
of smiles
higher and higher
sway dreams
in sad while

white floret trumpet
of lily pure
laughter
sunshine forever
winter's
hereafter




Author notes

Prompt: The picture AND/OR the word "Gaze/Gazing"
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x216/expressioniste/gazing.jpg

50 words

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  • PerVirtuous
    February 26
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    When you open up and share like this, I feel kissed.


  • Skybow silver member
    February 9

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    I agree this was so tender and sweet, quite my favorite poem here. Beautifully penned!

    Good luck in the contest


  • Kathraina silver member
    February 9

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    Aww this is such a tender write. Lovely job. Great imagery and flow and fits well with the prompt.
    Thank you for entering and good luck

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Cannonsfire
    February 9
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    Such a dear image with your words, it's delightful C