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One Night of Bliss

 

 

 

 

 

My scent filters through the room
a non negotiable odor unseen,
and it's calling only to you.

My skin is bare,
aurora exuberant,
and you are single.
 

I lick my lips and smile

for we dance

to our own heartbeats.

 

Is this true love?

I think not.

It's a one night stand

we'll both remember.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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30-60 words (55)

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  • Short but cute
    February 12
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    This is a great poem. I really like this.

  • Bruce silver member
    February 9
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    Nice job! Ended in the right place. Congrats on the Greeny!


  • justlikelivin
    February 9

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    Good job...

    the only thing that i think could be made better was the font in which you wrote you poem, it was a little hard to read... but over all good job, 4 stars


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 9

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    Had a few of those myself lol.. very saucy write indeed


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 9

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    Sizzeling...
    Well done here


    Delila


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 8
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    Nice.

    Good luck.

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