Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Faceless Composer

the unsung song,
the unplayed melody,
the unknown Love
of the faceless composer.

He paints his art out page after page,
splays his soul out in blood-black dots and lines,
each lilt and tilt of dormant rhythm is his heartbeat, and
every yearning harmony his deepest and most ponderous thought.

A song that will never be sung.
A refrain that will never reverberate within the thick skulls of men.
A melody that will never live.

He poured His Lifestream into

The Lovesong:
invisible wings,
emaciated, stunted, and withered
with ennui and disuse.

The winds of the world will rip them up
and tumble us back into meager dust.

We were so wilfully blind.
I never really knew beauty, when I could neither see nor hear
because I rejected Music.

Now we will never fly.
Now we will never breathe.
Now we will always die.

Author notes

15. Faceless Composer
Stone Soup 2009

A contest entry

Please read and comment.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6
  • A song that will never be sung.
    A refrain that will never reverberate within the thick skulls of men.
    A melody that will never live.

    He poured His Lifestream into

    The Lovesong:
    invisible wings,
    emaciated, stunted, and withered
    with ennui and disuse.

    The winds of the world will rip them up
    and tumble us back into meager dust.


    <3

  • graydeth
    August 26
    Edit | Reply
    Interesting thoughts here, though it turned from one thing to another midway. Thanks for entering.

  • Tempa Lee
    April 27
    Edit | Reply
    nice effort. best of luck.


    ~Dani~


  • Rhythm Child
    February 11
    Edit | Reply
    loved this
    very unique
    thanks for the effort


  • Jamaicanqueens
    February 10
    Edit | Reply

    Wonderful

    excellent!


  • Kathraina silver member
    February 8

    Edit | Reply
    Ooooh NICELY DONE! I love what you've done with the prompt!
    Awsome piece. Good luck to you in the contest!

    ♥ Kathraina

1 - 6 of 6