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My Conclusion

Eighty-six years have passed this earth
While I have been a citizen of it's perfection
I have walked the grounds from New York to Moscow
And seen sights that could only appear in dreams

Eighty-six years, as my life grew
From childhood, to adulthood; from youth to old
I've loved, I've lost and danced with the sun
Touched stars, seen angels, watched a family bloom

Eighty-six miles I've stumbled upon
Now I find myself at the dead end of my life's road
And around this corner I shall find the sun
The sweetest dawn of forevermore

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