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Reading Through Some Memories

I was reading through some memories,
as imagined tears ran down my cheeks.
These words that spoke of friends forever,
now just a life gone past.
You wished that we were closer,
is it a wish that you have still?
These tears would fall through my heart,
if only the sentiment were shared.
Memories these words will stay,
Till the day you say hello.

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Shew, it's been a while, tell me whats good and whats bad.

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  • MusicMattnessLives
    September 23

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    Well, it's truly what I asked for. Nothing but emotion. You had a great flow here, easy to read and touching at the same time. It's not like T.S. Elliot which I cannot understand to save my life. Good luck and great write

    Matt