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Brittany

Beautiful defines you in every form and fashion.
Raving spirit like a rainbow imbued on an ocean
Is what dwarfs to construe the joys of you.
The angel hair veils a divine love that I pursue.
The pacific where dolphins come to play,
And where orcas migrate to prey,
Neither contains the magnitude of love I have for
You, the wings I flutter to ascend on heaven's door.

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Dedicated to my Love!

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  • goalsv
    February 9
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    Very good love poem. Your feelings for them are so easily felt. A lovepoem straight from the heart.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 8

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    An acrostic....Reading my first time and I will be back to comment tomorrow...Great grandson! Grandma