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A begining?

a worldly coarseness
in the palm of your hand
pressed to my cheek

a russet coarseness
beneath my own

the taste of smoke
tinged with wine
on your lips

you gaze
unflinching
jade skies afire
with brown starburst

even when they should be closed

I know
because I'm peeking...

Where does it take you?

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