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My Three Best Friends (part 1)

Me

Myself

and

I

Are

Going

To

The

Movies.

Would

You

Like

To

Come

With

Us

Author notes

Quoted at a Poets West Venue, Seattle, Wa., 3/21/2009 4pm -5:30pm DCK

Inspired by this poem: "Me, Myself and a Poem", by sOuL
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5035905?feature=209491

Minor revision done on 2/11/2009 DCK

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  • oWl Quill
    July 10

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    I love this poem! it's so simple, but so moving. I especially like the title I think it really adds to the poem. great work!!

  • poetrynovice
    April 22
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    Great!

    Exceptionally clever!

  • Bob Fox
    April 12
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    Sure

    But it must be a movie that captures my mind & heart. lol

  • cool form and message good job kind of funny tooo Nice write


  • light insight silver member
    March 14

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    Bravo

    You were right about me enjoying this write and there are several ways take messages from so few words. Thank you for the link and I send one titled Me, myself, and I.

    Rhon

  • bstfrnd
    February 26

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    That is a nice write. I liked that you identified your self as separate entities. very cool write.


  • whatamanycando
    February 25

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    I enjoyed this write, how it journies in the solidity of one alone, yet content with that emotion. Fully and wholly enlightened by the fact that even when we are alone, there is always someone with you; yourself. Once again great write my friend. I always enjoy reading your work.

    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      February 25
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      Ah, at last someone who doesn't think I have a split personality! (lol) Thanks for your comments; compliments, and applause, my friend. I do appreciate them.


  • Sandygram
    February 19

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    Great Write

    Love the concept of this poem. I think I know your friends, me, myself, and I. I seem to see them quite often. Always a pleasure to read your poetry.
    I wrote one with this title but it was a few years ago and doesnt show up on my list anymore. A delight to read. Take care. Hugs, Sandy

    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      February 19

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      Thank you for your humorous comments; compliments, and applause. I do appreciate them. I hope you have a good evening. I shall, and you also.


  • Heroesrox
    February 17

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    I like this! It gives a chuckle and engages us, the readers! I wanna go see a movie now. lol. Thanks so much for the share!

    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      February 17
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      Thanks for the comment; compliment, and applause. I do appreciate them.
      If you go to the movies, be sure to take your 3 best friends with you!!! lol


  • just mercedes gold member
    February 13

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    Simple form, but it raises some complex ideas. The reader is engaged by the final question. Well done.

    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      February 13
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      Thank you, me and my two friends, each enjoyed a favorite movie, at a local tri-plex theater. lol Appreciate your comments; and compliment.


  • condor gold member
    February 13

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    I sometimes find poems of this sort hard to comrehend, but this one really put a big smile on my face and made me laugh so much. There you were the three of you picking a film from the papes and agreeing on the very same one. It was a really clever and cute write. I'd argue with me but for myself! lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just a great little piece indeed.

    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      February 13
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      Thank you for your comments; compliments, and applause. I always feel better when I hear that my poetry can make someone laugh.


  • PoeticMadnesss
    February 13

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    Ahahahaha very strange poem indeed, but effective nonetheless. I loved the random question placed at the end, it made me laugh a little inside. Keep up the great work!

    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      February 13
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      Aye, it 'tis that. I think me and my friends will go to the movies (at a tri-plex of course). lol Thank you for your compliment; and comments. I do appreciate them.
      I'm always glad when one of my wee little writes makes a person laugh!


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 12
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    L O L ! been there, done that one before. thank you for sharing this with me today and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie


    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      February 12
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      Thank you for your most thoughtful/humorous comment; compliments and applause. I do appreciate them.


  • CountryCousin
    February 12
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    Neat trick.

    I liked the way you used one word lines to form a complete poem. Good job.

  • luvdrkchocolate
    February 11

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    LOL This is quite some poem that you have going on here! It made me laugh because it was so simple that it's easy to overlook. But you slyly engage your audience by asking an easy and common question. So I think that's clever. You did a good job of expressing yourself here.

    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      February 11
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      I'm glad you enjoyed this satirical little write. Thanks for the comments; compliments, and applause. I do appreciate them.

  • SimplySonnets gold member
    February 9

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    Implied sadness.

    A good idea, the tale of a sad affair, applicable in many situations in real life. the use of everyday language enhances and intensifies the emotions of the final plea. love your words, thank you.

    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      February 10
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      A most intriguing interpretation to a humorous poem about a psychiactric condition. Yet, I think it is quite valid for both my poem and the one that inspired it. Thanks for your thoughtful comment; compliments, and applause, for I do appreciate them.

  • Nice job. I enjoyed this. I hope that you all agreed to go to the same film.

    Mike


    • Clovis...Curious silver member
      February 9
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      We went to a tri-plex! lol Thanks for the comment; compliment, and applause, I do appreciate them.

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