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What I'll do

Make me hurt and make me bleed.
But it's fine, it's not your love I need.
Kill me, use me, make me cry
And don't even thing about why.
Don't listen or comfort, only take
And leave an empty soul in your wake.
Try and control me like you do.
But someday I'll run away from you.

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  • XxVampyressxX
    February 12, 2009
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    this has strong emotion. i loved every part of your poem its so full of power and emotion.