Pecking and Puking
Pecking and puking from prejudiced pigs.
Sharpies and shit heads and snits.
Fools and fakers and fart sniffing freaks.
Toilet mouths, takers and twits.
I have been put off by gibbering knobs.
Stayed off for ever so long;
Lashed by the tongues that are twisted and forked;
Come back-'cause it's they who are wrong.
He says I insulted her, or that bunch.
She says my scribbles are crap.
I now have something to say to all those.
"Bugger you! Shut your big yap."
I have a lot that the world wants to hear.
I don't care what's your disease.
You cannot dictate the way that I feel.
I AM IMMUNE TO YOUR SLEAZE!
If you have a problem with something I say
Then YOU have a problem, not me.
I am the poet and know it: Not you.
I know that there'll always be.
Pecking and puking from prejudiced pigs.
Sharpies and shit heads and snits.
Fools and fakers and fart sniffing freaks.
Toilet mouths, takers and twits.
Go ahead, criticise; gibber away.
Tell me all your petty lies.
It because I'm so much better than you
You'd like to hear my good-byes.
Author notes
I left for a while, about two years, because someone I thought worthy of respect here was on me about offending someone on here who, incidently never did let me know she was offended. I came back because I realised he was the one with issues; not me, not her. I've been back a fair while now and the same character; one whom I did call friend, has called me all sorts of foul things because I wrote some pro Palestinian/anti Israeli stuff. It seems he had some sort of altercation with an Islamic person and his prejudices are driving him. He has a problem with his prejudices and in order to get on with my life I just clicked the 'IGNORE' button and blocked his emails. problem solved, this time without a two year vacation. *****Don't let fools dictate your actions.*****
A contest entry
- Why Did I Join Again? (Rant Included) by Allyce May.
13200 points, ended March 10, 28 entries
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Probably should be a few changed to commas.
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Very clever. The allieteration is great and the sentiment perfect. Line 21, did you intend the period at the end of this line? Buff
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That is some bad arse alliteration right there!! LOL. I stumbled at "Come back-'cause it's them are wrong." Also, I think you should read over this and edit it because I spotted a couple of minor errors. Other than that I really enjoyed it
Thanks for you author comments. It must have been awful but at least it inspired some good poetry 
Thanks for entering
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Yeah.
I left a word out. Not unusual. Thanks.
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*****Don't let fools dictate your actions.*****
Like it. And I'm glad you refuse this time to let them get you down!!
Welcome back- if no-one's said it already...and keep on keeping on! -
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Thanks.
It is one of the best bits of advice I ever got and it works no matter how often I share it.
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