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Come for me my love

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Joseph my dearest,

How I pray these words find you my love,

and one of us lives to find the other.

 

all of Columbia is burning

out into the country they have come.

 

I have set  fire to our home myself 

poisoned the smoke house meat.

sit the horses loose, save yours.

 

dressed in breeches and boots

out into Saluda I ride to the shack

leaving this letter where

in a place you may find it

know that your babe and I are safe.

 

Joseph my hands shake, my heart is troubled

as half a person I am with out you.

husband I will protect this babe of  ours

or die from the trying.

 

Come for me when duty is done.

I pray for your wellness

to touch your face again.

Forever my love forever.

 Sara

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Civil War letter
written from a SC woman to her husband at war.


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  • evershine-90
    September 27

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    This is a heartfelt and beautiful piece. It's very touching and stunningly penned! great work! Keep it up! Thank you soo much for your entry

    Evershine

  • Great poem. A good snapshot in time. I really liked the flow. And I really liked these lines

    dressed in breeches and boots
    out into Saluda I ride to the shack
    leaving this letter where
    in a place you may find it
    know that your babe and I are safe.

    They just sounded so nice and it just rolled off the tong. Fantastic write!

  • ricachic gold member
    May 31

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    Nice moment in time

    Thank you for taking us back in time, but I'm surprised that a good southern gal such as yourself would refer to the "War Between the States" as the "Civil War". , just kidding, Great job, I enjoyed the read.
    Rick


    • Rheea gold member
      May 31
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      well we all know it was really the great Northern aggression .. I am just polite while I grit my southern teeth sometimes =)
      and sometimes not lol.

  • So vivid. I've always loved 19th century stories.

  • Sensational

    Dear Rheea :
    I just read this and I was stunned by it . I recognized the writing as a nineteenth century style letter . I said to myself , Did Rheea possibly write this ? Then I saw the note by the author you put there explaining what it was . I thought , thank you for treating us to something we don't read every day . I have been called by academics
    a nineteenth century writer , that is why I was so thrilled by it . I can't thank you enough .

    Greenwolfe 1962


    • Rheea gold member
      May 1
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      I wrote it for a contest dear one , you would enjoy the letters written , most were far better than mine. Thank you so much.

  • A very poignant and impressive piece of poetry that was a pleasure to read and ponder.

  • Awesome...

    Impressive work!!!
    Such wonderful dialogue & story telling that enthralls the reader in the scene it sets...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!

  • Judith Chandler
    February 22
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    A dramatic story


  • Sandygram silver member
    February 12

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    What an amazing story you weave within your poetic words. This was a pleasure to read. Take care, Sandy

  • Michael P
    February 9

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    a gorgous write, absolutely wonderful. I could see the burning south, and feel the resolution of a loving wife protecting her child and such a brave calmness about her demeanor...peace


  • doolie gold member
    February 9

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    Such a sad and heartfelt write Rheea. The imagery is perfect and it flows beautifully. Thanks for a much enjoyable read.

  • Hot Llama Love
    February 9

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    Great imagery. Very strong, I can feel both the panic and resolve as I smell the smoke, and, hear the distant rumble of the Yankee artillery.


  • arafura gold member
    February 9
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    Lovely!


  • Cup-a-Joe
    February 8

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    Rheea,

    Oh my this is so well done. I really can see this happening, in my mind. This Sis, is a true love letter.
    Joe

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