As the pain begins to pass
And the mem'ries start to fade
I can't help but rummage through
All the grave mistakes I've made.
I can't help but wonder what
Would have happened if I'd kissed
-- when I had the chance...
What sweet moments have I missed?
Only now the pain sets in.
For now it's certain. I'm too late.
Wish I'd waited when I went.
Wish I'd gone instead of wait...
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Wow! I especially love the last two lines of the last stanza.
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Wonderful rhyme and meter that simply slides off the readers lips when recited aloud. The cadence creates a depth of image and emotion that draws the reader into the poem and the mind of the narrator. For a short verse, this piece speaks volumes.
Love,
Amera♥
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Great!!
This is spectacular and the poem is deeply decribed. I like the way that it flows. I think that by the way that you write I can tell that you will make a great teacher. I wouldnt change anything about this poem. I think that It is good just the way that it is. This is great. Keep up the good work!!!
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Thank you.
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Your Welcome
Your so very welcome
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Ahh this conjures the emotive regret in feeling quite well. I like the cadence of the words.
Quite beautiful.
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Thank you.
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