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Look at me

I'm writing this to Daddy
The man who ate my heart
The one who never knew me
He just knows that we're apart

But, still he's looking at me
Gazing through my eyes
Telling me to hurt the world
And loving me with his lies

Maybe if I tap my shoes
His memory will go away
But, he's screaming in my brain
So I know he's here to stay

Daddy please! Leave me alone
Look at me no more
Thoughts of you, please be gone
The ones trapped beneath my core

I'm sick of your words, Daddy
Did you ever speak the truth?
I guess my innocence wasn't enough
So, you took away my youth

Author notes

I got the idea off of 5 little pictures in my poem book of my eyes.


AP= Kristybrainsikk

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  • WednesdayJade
    April 6

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    Wow. Very sad. The thing is that I don't think the memories will ever go away... sometimes that's the worst thing.
    Thank you for entering
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  • Rizzie
    February 21
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    your poems are very pretty. really. :<