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Sex With You

Tongues pressed against flesh
Deep splurging interrupted
By soft, dripping moans....

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  • sense surreal
    March 13, 2009
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    Oh Oh Oh!
    I like the dripping moans, definitely a lot of that...
    phew! I love this!


  • darell
    February 12, 2009
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    Heat..

    rising beneath a pulsating
    heartbeat in the ravishes of passion.
    Intense!

  • Dobar Dan
    February 9, 2009
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    Yes

    yes


  • Naughtygrlred
    February 8, 2009
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    nice...puts a smile on my face


  • Bruce silver member
    February 8, 2009
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    Oooooh! Very nice. Short and hot!


  • GizmoFox
    February 8, 2009
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    This is short but impactful; I could visualize and feel this piece. Nice write.

    G.F.

  • mcfreeman
    February 8, 2009
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    Sixty-nice


  • hotchocolate gold member
    February 8, 2009
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    I like this here! Glad to see you back

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