Explosions pierce the
heart of my soul.
Blood trickles down
the broken shards of life's mistakes.
Fire licks at me
crackling
spitting it's searing anger at me.
Sparking
a terrible beauty
forced upon my
empty soul.
Raw
untamed hatred
lashing out
unwanted
confused.
A jagged flame
fearless
burning
in the face of death.
Pain
ricocheting off the crumbling walls
constricting my soul
from existence.
The demonic splintering
the angelic.
When the rain begins
it's misty
washing away the charred
remains of
life's mistakes.
A sense of security
registers through my pain.
The burning enmity
extinguished from my soul.
gentle pounding in
it's place
soothing the broken shards
of life.
My life
a mix of fire and rain
forever burning
through.
Is this a good poem???
Comments
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This was so....Amazing...I wish I had a better word...but it was just so beautiful that I was rendered speechless.
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luff it!
awesome poem!!!!!! hmmm...fire and rain....how about something with earth and air? all four elements??? soooooo freaking good!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
its awsome
u rock keep up the good work
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