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Swan – [haiku]



   
    blue on blue
pond ripples two reflections
                lonesome widow… weeps



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modern haiku
picture inspired; http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2436/305.jpg?1234143868

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  • Swan song gold member
    February 22, 2009
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    Very true a haiku that signifies how they mate for life Very well done

  • Pisces rainbow
    February 9, 2009

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    Two reflections

    two sides of a coin

    very sad but beautiful

    God bless you my friend...

     


  • Naughtygrlred
    February 8, 2009
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    pretty


  • Dalaney gold member
    February 8, 2009

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    to me, haiku is like taking a pill guaranteed to make me feel like I am floating on air. Even though this haiku has a sense of sadness, it is a beautiful sadness, if that makes sense. Love, Lane