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Silent

For me it was my silent screams
and broken dreams .
I no more than a crumbled child ...
that lay curled in the bed - while she wished to the world - that she were dead.

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My torment ended when I finally ran away at the age of 15 and took my newborn child with me.

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  • sad broken dreams no more than a broken child we r talking abuse here arnt we .love u love your work


  • penman gold member
    February 27
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    Powerful

    Such very intense descriptions. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.


  • heartbrokenmoon
    February 17
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    oh that so sad and yet cute i like ur style...lol-smiles-

  • StarLover
    February 8

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    Tough times only make us stronger as women.. I know the pain.. In this... so little words yet they say so much! xoxo Miranda


    • guardianhost gold member
      February 9
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      Thank you for reading and commenting - sincerely

      Thank you, I try every day to be strong but I am still just a marshmellow.
      Sometimes it can be difficult to cope,,, it helps reading positive comments. Thank you.
      cheryl

  • Wow. This is a very powerful poem. Your poetry style is unique. Awesome job. From the AN I can tell you have had an interesting life.

    Mike

    • guardianhost gold member
      February 8
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      You made me Smile

      Strange, I thought of this short verse after reading a piece on child abuse another writer posted - it was like a trigger - I just shot this out . Really never expecting a comment/ Thank you Mike, for always being there for me and supporting my writings.

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