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linger.

Linger, please
Forgo the formalities
And place your pride in me

It's just us here, see
It's just hearsay, dear
That's left us stranded
A million miles away
From familiarity

Remember, please
Life: pre complication
Love: post blind frustration

And I will forget
That I'm not supposed to be here
That I really am a million miles away
From home.

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  • Mr Sandman
    February 10
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    "life: pre complication"...

    There's this girl that I love and it is for her that I choose the path I am on. This path that I have chosen keeps me away and pushes me physically further away, but I am always with her and she with me.

    This reminds me of that. It brings no sadness, but joy to me.
    I feel as if this piece was written for me... a tad selfish, I know...

    It's a great write though and i thank you dearly.


  • sevnsyn silver member
    February 8
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    beautiful

    This is beautiful