My heart,
Broken,
My soul,
Burned,
I poured my heart,
Onto this paper,
Stained with ink,
And bloody tears,
You rejected,
My love,
You burned my shattered soul,
My heart,
Burns in pain,
My chest is throbbing,
I can't breathe,
I can't think,
I'm dying,
Thoughts always fill my mind,
You,
And your rejection,
You denied me of the only thing I have ever wanted,
To hear,
Or even read,
Three small words,
That you throw to him,
So easily,
Words I'll never hear from you,
Words I want you to know,
Goodbye,
I love you......
im done with this, whats the use anymore, idk if ill write anymore after this, and i know its all over the place, thats just how i feel,.......
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hmm..
this poem is so intense i had tears in my eyes i really like it!!!!!!!!!!!
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wow. i really felt it with this one.
the emotions here were so raw, hurts just to read on.
"My chest is throbbing,
I can't breathe,
I can't think,"
a hidden pain behind each word
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=(
awwwww its so sad and really good!!!!!
i can really relate to this ur AMAZING
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weeellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll done
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Awe. this is so freaking sad. and blah the bad thing is I am already sad enough and I know how you feel. it hurts to be rejected by the one you love it's no fun. Everything has gone wrong when you feel alone in the world. I know the feeling I can relate so well. and you shouldn't give up on poetry because it's a gift that you can write poetry not many others can...
and yeah I think you should continue because I love your poetry you understand how I feel. and yeah I feel this way at the moment too. it made me cry when I read this
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this was beautiful... so much emotion...
im sorrythat it took sorrow and pain to write this great of piece.
Kris
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