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Oral Sensation –[Senryu]


   
    between lips
faraway hills heighten
            immersed in her river…


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modern; Sensual Senryu

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  • Draig aine gold member
    February 11
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    wow

  • Aisades
    February 8
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    You are one of the most sensual poets I've ever read Mally.


  • Naughtygrlred
    February 8
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    very intense, can be taken a few ways, but none the lesssensual of course.


    • Malabu
      February 8
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      ohh wow a clappie guy... gee thanks naughty
      and for reading my work

  • oooohhhhhhh

    very sensual, you sure know your ku and formed verses, love this one as well , you fail to amaze us in them, thank you for this entry, good luck
    MM

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