between lips
faraway hills heighten
immersed in her river…
Author notes
modern; Sensual Senryu
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A contest entry
- Haiku any style by HopelessScribbles.
700 points, ended February 11, 30 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow


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thank you hun

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You are one of the most sensual poets I've ever read Mally.


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i guess because i dream alot
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very intense, can be taken a few ways, but none the lesssensual of course.
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ohh wow a clappie guy... gee thanks naughty

and for reading my work
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oooohhhhhhh
very sensual, you sure know your ku and formed verses, love this one as well , you fail to amaze us in them, thank you for this entry, good luck
MM

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