Under a sycamore tree;
in a park down by the sea.
Not fully hidden from view;
this encounter did ensue,
and that is where He touched me.
He roughly touched my right breast.
One track mind, Forget the rest
that surrounded us that day.
He only wanted to play,
and my body, his conquest.
If others saw, they would frown.
He roughly pushed me face down.
With my ass high in the air;
he yelled at me to stay there!
My little slut of the town!
As he entered my wet folds;
I only heard his stern scolds.
Just keep quiet my bitch!
I've learned when i feel a pinch
to always do as I'm told.
He took me right in the park
and it wasn't even dark.
My body, his amusement
to ride until he is spent.
What a good fuck, his remark.
Author notes
So many comments on how this bordered on Rape, or was not truly D/s, but for me, the nature of the D/s relationship is a balance, and in that balance an agreement of what is allowed and not allowed...with some, force is a very exciting thought...between these two...it was a public display of what they enjoy.
(fyi...i am a rape victim myself...in force situations where it truly is agreed, i am in control)
Thanks for all the comments!!!
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A contest entry
- Erotic Quill Challenge - Round 2 by Corvus Corone.
1000 points, ended March 3, 2009, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
All comments are welcome!
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He "entered the wet folds" signifying she was excited by this. To me he used her and did not finish the act, let her not satied. Yes the risk taken does spice things up. Well and well expressed.
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few cum running
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Thank you for your entry.
This is a chilling yet erotic piece. Dominance has gone to far when the feelings are seemingly sacrificed for the Dominant's pleasure, in my not so humble opinion. Your poem does however have quite an impact and certainly leaves food for thought.
Well done
DLC and DOM
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Sharp, clear, sad for me to read. The difference between a Master and a beast is the art they create as they achieve release. This is a good display of dominance and submission, but verges on rape. Done in a monotone and monochromatic description that is fitting for the scence. Artistically, well done. The rest ...
Peace & Light,
Tom B.
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yes he "does" sound romantic sometimes
well done little flower
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Well writen. But he don't sound very romantic to me. hehe
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Good job with this. Wish you the best of luck in this contest.
**Master Ktulu**
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