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Statement

I fall to the ground
But spring higher with momentum
My worries surround
me, but I stretch and look past them
The rain turns to pour
But I can't get any wetter
I know this feeling
It couldn't get any better

My legs lead my stride
My chin shows my pride
My hands at my side
Guiding my movement

I wait and I thrive
I dip and I dive
I fight and survive
Live by this statement

Paper cut
scissor cut
Sword cut
Wound
All of them
can hurt but
can heal
soon

Author notes

Fight on!

A contest entry

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Comments

  • Judith Chandler
    February 10

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    I take it you are responding to the prompt about hope? I really enjoyed this piece, so upbeat and positive.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


    • Kmezz
      February 10
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      Yes, and i'm glad you enjoyed it! You're welcome.