What if i'm telling you too much?
What if you don't love me as much as I love you?
What if this Valentine's Day will be the worst day of my life because I tell you everything there is to know about how much i love you?
-gasp- But. . .
What if I'm telling you everything that I should?
What if you do love me as much as I love you?
What if this Valentine's Day will be the specialist day that ever happened to me?
Who knows?
Love.
Love knows.
That's who.
It's an essence that's more powerful than any presence,
That any human being can ever understand.
Love is the greatest good.
Love will help me and break me, but that doesn't mean i shouldn't experiment and try to hold on to YOU.
So I will.
I'll experiment this Love potion.
I'll tell you.
I'll tell you everything.
I'll give you your gift.
I know you though.
I know you'll like it.
I know you'll respect it.
But i won't know if you'll feel that way about me.
I won't know what will happen when you open my gift.
That's the chance I'm willing to take for you.
That's the bridge i will build and in the end hopefully cross happily with you.
That's the leap off the cliff that i'll live through or die from.
And if I die, so be it.
Taht doesn't change how much I love you.
That doesn't change how you made me feel every day since the day i fell in Love with you.
It'll only change how I look at you,
And how I will communicate with you.
But you know what?
I am willing to at least try.
Because I know that's what I should do.
I know that's what I want to do.
And Love will hopefully make the right turn at the fork in the road.
What do you think? Honestly. . .
Comments
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Line 8: "specialist" isn't the correct word, it's someone devoted to a certain area of a subject. You'd have to replace it with "... most special" because I don't think specialest is a word :]
"It's an essence that's more powerful than any presence" AWESOME!
I really like your work, it flows, makes perfect sense. You've really got talent :] -
this is good, and i'd say go for it!

on line 13 you spelled presence wrong though,
and on line 14 you spelled that wrong
other than that its good -
Very nice.



