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[four a.m.]


exhale
&& my breath casts shadows
in the pool of night's pure air
as i draw out a
satisfied sigh

to see the sky
gently toss
in easy sleep
slowly waking

soon grey settles down
to a low silver shade,
soon the sun's exhales
cast shimmers,
set the air aglow

as i draw out a
satisfied sigh
to see the darkness
turn to light

yeah, soon the Son's
very exhale
will strip off this
shade of night

&& i'm slowly waking

see my darkness
change to light,
feel my darkness
change to light,

feel it changing


Author notes

Jesus is the Light of the world! Yeahhhh!

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  • Wow. It left me breathless. I am not a very religious person, but this is just beautiful. I thought the title was very unique too
    Rose