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yeah

something along this life i lead
has made me feel secure
and then i lost all i had had
and left me wanting more

fuck it all tho it cannot be
for nothing is my life
and dieing now would gladly be
by doing of my own knife

so praise me so
and praise me loud
for i am ever gone
oh so nothing....

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  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 24

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    Your words so deep and emotionally felt. You have written such a wonderful, but sorrow filled piece.