Belong ye to my body
Hands on my hips. Lips on my lips.
Eyes through my entire spectral being.
Belong ye to my soul.
Belong ye to my spirit.
Bind ye to my art and beauty.
Bind ye to my love and duty.
Belong ye to my laughter.
The rapture explosive.
Belong ye to my mind.
Sweet words woven through
A tapestry of silent chorus’
Belong me to thine heart.
Belong ye to mine.
Together two on a journey through and through,
To that dirty, dusty land of shattered torches.
Travel we through the darkness
Out th’otherside, satiated and untainted.
Veins tumescent, vessels engorged, pulsating in our skins.
Yours in mine and mine in yours.
Amorous relenting spent.
Infinity present thineself to ourself.
Thou shalt meet with our singular duality.
Two whole separate fused
Entities bound and belong’ed
Belong ye to thineself.
That pretty, pretty self
Called Universe, God
Called by my name.
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mmmm..yes
that total two into one concept..wow yeah, belong ye to me so sensual, so hot, so passionate..yeah..i loved this piece!!
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Exactly what I wanted it to be. Passionate! can always count on you man! Thanks!
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very strong
i love your style. i like the sexual references. i love the sense of two although you indicate that it is not entirely perfect. that is often best. your sense and control of universe potrays great confidence . you are a highly skilled writer. i am deeply impressed.
kevin o'connor/ui'connabhair
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Thank you Kevin. You have no idea how much that means to me!
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This has the sing-song feel of an incantation, which gives it a kind of power.
I too like the archaic language, but if you are going to use it, make sure you get it right. For example "thineself" doesn't work - the right word is "thyself".
This is a point of personal preference: I have moved away from fancy backgrounds and coloured fonts, because I feel that as we are poets our words should say it all, should become the colours and the pictures. When I see black on white, I feel that a poet has confidence in his or her work.
Your work is very interesting.
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Thank you Mairi.
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very good. i love the olden style english. it added a vibe to this poem that really sparked it and made it come alive in my mind. beautiful description of two lovers united in a passionate moment. at least, thats what i got from it.
good write.
Belong ye to my body
Hands on my hips. Lips on my lips.
Eyes through my entire spectral being.
the first stanza grabbed me and pulled me into the rest of the poem.
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Thank you. It did seem like the perfect way to open.
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