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I want you to know

I want you to know what you don’t.
I want you to know before you know on your own.
Know with heart, know with mind, know with soul.
Your strength, your purity and beauty are eternal.

My Child, you are God. My child, you are Goddess
My child you belong to the Universe, Star of my soul.
Let me let you know your power, glory and grace.
Let me let you know all Is your creation, Almighty Child.

Fruit of forever, You should know,
We have danced together through all realms.
All the Deities have welcomed us home,
Through all wormholes and living instances.

While you’re here, this time around, forget not
the dazzling smile of the crocodile.
Forget not the choppy waters
Or their peaceful seabeds.
Do as you please
As you please.

We together, we are life and God therein.
God, as is known this tangible thing, binds and does not so.
You, as God, should know – you have life to tend.
You, as Goddess, should know – you have providence.

You are here as you chose to be.
To be mine, to learn and to know.
Pursue those knowings for which you here remain.
Abandon all fleshly fears. They are not yours.
Take from your delighted abundance.
Take all that you can, give three times more.
Take all that you can and then, quietly , leave it all behind.

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For my kids.

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Comments

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  • Excellent

    I thought this was passionate . very well written piece, not hard to follow. a wonderful take on life Enjoyable, There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one Alexander QQ...

  • kedoconnor
    March 18

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    strong again

    i love your notion of life. i think the pow of internal reservation is pronounced and released. the crcodile's smile on the waters edge is a powerful metaphor. the idea of removal and giving to the great uncertain is well expressed. give yourself to thineself is the clear application of love. hell, i wish i wrote that. well done. i will certainly read more as time allows. strong.

    kevin o'connor/ui'connabhair
    forgive my ignorance, but what is wiccan? i am interested to know. i find the source of your ideas intriguing.


    • daemonfae
      April 2
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      Oh! There is so much to explain to do it justice! Google it. The websites will explain far better than I could. I feel so strongly about it this will turn into a shrt story!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    March 4
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    I think my kids would laugh at me, but that's just them!

    That last line is brilliant.


  • Catacomb
    February 26

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    Mmm, interesting. Depending on their age would depend on whether or not I'd tell them. I'm actually 17.....but turning 18 in 5 months but I didn't want 'adult filtering' bleh. Ek voel weird om in afrikaans op hierdie site te praat, maar ek kan darem ook die 'moedertaal' praat. Anyhoo...ek doen alles op my foon meestal, so dis maar bietjie moeilik met min airtime!! 'hee hee' enjoy your night, I'm going to read my novel a bit and SLEEEEEEP!

    • daemonfae
      February 26
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      My meisie is 4 maande oud en my seun is amper 2. Ek het die geskryf een dag toe ek baaie miz gevoel het en ge wonder wat as ek VREK (of myself vrek maak)voor ek kan hulle hierdie goed leer? toe skryf ek die en toe voel ek beter. Ek is eintlik engels maar vir een of ander rede praat ek soma baaie afrikaans deesdae. Sjoe! Daai was baaie!


  • queen Moderators member
    February 12

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi daemonfae

    This is really beautiful i hope you give this to your kids they will treasure it please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
    site greeter


    • daemonfae
      February 13
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      Thanks

      It will most definatly go to a special place for them and their children. Thank you for the comment.

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