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Without You

Curling up
Crisp sheets
Alone
The bed we
Used to
Share

Sleeping in 'til
Half past
Two
Will never
Quite
Compare

To restless nights
Held in your
Arms
The hunger
Which we
Fed

The life that
We used to
Share
Now lifeless
Cold and
Dead

A contest entry

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  • Temptation.
    February 25
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    ooo short and too the point. i like this alot thanks for entering.