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Peacefully Disturbed

Once upon a time,
    we wandered into an endless bliss.
  Things were not as good as they seemed though,
      One wrong turn
One wrong answer 
  And we were spiraling backwards
into a wonderful world of hate.
          Yet we were so close,
You know everything about me
      yet nothing at all.
And because of this I give you all that I am
    and more.
In hopes you'll live on

peacefully
disturbed.

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  • TheMistakenTruth
    February 8, 2009
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    huh. I got a slight personal feeling from this. Creative I think. You did a good job.